The diagram illustrates information about telephone signal in the UK for the years 1995-2002.

The diagram illustrates information about telephone signal in the UK for the years 1995-2002.
The diagram illustrates information about telephone
signal
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in the UK for the years 1995-2002.
Overall
, the telephone calls are divided into three types and their
progresses
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are various.
First,
the highest index of minutes was in 1999 between local calling -- a majority
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in ten(90%). What is
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the lowest point?
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number is merely a tiny faction in
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1995 in the middle of mobile calls. Based on
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, it can see that
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minutes inside the country, the less from mobile
phone
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and
average
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the average
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rings from abroad or nationalities. For 1995-2002 years
the
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both types: mobile and international buzz
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increased from less
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ten per cent to more than two in five(40%) and second -- about one in three to in the region of sixty per cent. The third category between 1995-1999 years are grown from more than 70% to exactly a nine in ten,
whereas
between 1999-2002 are fallen to starting position
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than eighty
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cent.
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