The diagram illustrates information about telephone signal in the UK for the years 1995-2002.
The diagram illustrates information about telephone
signal
in the UK for the years 1995-2002.
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signals
Overall
, the telephone calls are divided into three types and their progresses
are various.
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progress
signs of progress
First,
the highest index of minutes was in 1999 between local calling -- a majority nine
in ten(90%). What is Change preposition
of nine
about
the lowest point? Change preposition
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This
number is merely a tiny faction in the
1995 in the middle of mobile calls. Based on Change the article
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, it can see that more
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average
rings from abroad or nationalities.
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the average
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are
increased from less Unnecessary verb
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that
ten per cent to more than two in five(40%) and second -- about one in three to in the region of sixty per cent. The third category between 1995-1999 years are grown from more than 70% to exactly a nine in ten, Correct word choice
than
whereas
between 1999-2002 are fallen to starting position less
than eighty Change preposition
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