Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Happy, Goldy, Karam I am writing

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letter to you about

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the very

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beautiful trip in my life. I hope everyone good. I never forget

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memory and really to thank you all for company me. Actually

last

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few days

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was very busy because my mother was admitted

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hospital

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the hospital

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That is

why I replied late. Now she is fine. I show all photos to my mother and she laughed

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some funny pictures. Now

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am requesting

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apply

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you all come to my home. Next week Here we will celebrate my birthday. But

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don't want to

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any excuse and I hope you all come to my house. We will enjoy together. Best Regards Karamjeet

Submitted by jkaram811 on Wed Jun 14 2023

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

117 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos invite them to come and stay with you

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Some people think that government should decide which subject should students’ study at the University while others believe that students should be allowed to apply for subjects they prefer. Discuss both views.

The government should make laws about people's nutrition and food choice. Others argue that would be their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agreeor disagree.