Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Give details how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sport and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #friends #sport #community #effects #people

Dear Sir, I am Kiran,a resident of Brampton,Ontario.I am writing

this

letter to express my concern regarding the decision of shutting down the sports centre in our area. To commence with,I am part of

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sports centre since 2005.

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is a great place for children as they can enjoy distinct games in their spare time.I always prefer to do my yoga and exercise here.

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,elderly people come for a walk on a daily basis.

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centre is being used by people of all

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age groups as per their needs. Sir,the closure of

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building will

definately

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definitely

affect the children as there will be no place left for them to play.They will get stuck with their video games only.People will be unable to come from their houses.So

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would appreciate

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this

decision should be stopped. Hope to hear a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

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