The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
The bar graph illustrates how many minutes of telephone calls
that
were done by British people based on the call types between 1995 and 2002. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
calls from the local area were the most favourites among them, although
there was a fluctuation throughout the period, whereas
national and international and mobiles witnessed an increase.
To begin
, local
line Add an article
the local
was
started at just above 70 Unnecessary verb
apply
billion
in 1995, rising gradually to a peak of 90 billion
in 1999, and then
dropping significantly until at around 70 billion
, which was the
similar number Correct article usage
a
with
the beginning.
Change preposition
at
On the other hand
, national and international calling experienced a
steady growth over the period, when it had almost 35 Correct article usage
apply
billion
in the first year, soaring by a
half in the final year. Remove the article
apply
Moreover
, the progress of mobile phone
showed an upward trend until 1999, and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
then
rising
sharply to reach above 40 Wrong verb form
rose
billion
in the following three years.Submitted by dimasfajarairlangga on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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