Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For decades, environmental degradation

is being

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deteriorated as time goes by. Some say that

this

situation leads to the extinction of different animal

as well as

plant species

while

others believe that there are several integral environmental shortcomings apart from

creatures

' disappearances. In

this

essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions. On the one hand, the majority of people ponder that most

creatures

have been at risk of being disappeared forever because of human greed and thoughtlessness

this

was not an issue in the past there are a variety of activities that have been done by mankind with the aim of quenching desires related to careless consumers. As proven by statistics, over ten animal species die each year and if

this

condition does not hinder, most animals like tigers, pandas and even whales would not exist any more, and

thus

,

this

situation not only puts animals in danger but

also

contributes to human extinction

subsequently

.

On the other hand

, a growing number of folks oppose

this

idea as they consider that there are a lot of environment-related problems to be focused on

instead

of

creatures

. They think that global warming is human's head enemy

due to

evidence which shows that if scientists can not find a solution,

this

would

guides

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guide

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to the disappearance of the ozone layer and

finally

everyone lose their lives so

this

situation

put

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all

creatures

not only plants in danger. The result of a survey in Canada explored that mankind has only ten years to deal with

this

shortcoming, and

hence

, other problems should be ranked second to take measures and scientists from all around the world ought to work collaboratively to beat it Ultimately. In conclusion, there is no doubt all these bothersome shortcomings happen because of our devastating activities;

however

, most of them are insurmountable if appropriate measures are taken immediately. Personally, in my opinion, we are better

to solve

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off solving

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these unwanted situations before

dying

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they die

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out forever

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apply

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accordingly

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