Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friend . In your letter: a. Thank them for the holiday and the photos. b. Explain why you didn't write earlier. c. invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Mark and Martha. Hopping my letter finds both of you in good condition. After our extremely awesome trip to your home, Nicki get sick and I was looking after the children. Now she is better, I found some time to get in touch with you.

Firstly

, we both want to thank you for the hospitality, and the great catch-up we had together. It had been a long time, since our

last

get-together. The excursions you had arranged for us were all amazing, as I can see and for the photos you took and sent us. Our nights in your yard will be unforgettable. The memories from our years as students in college were slightly forgotten. So many beautiful pictures came out again.

Secondly

, we invite you and Martha, to spend the Christmas Holidays here in Boston. We will be very happy to have you two here, reciprocate your hospitality and refresh our memories once again. Let us know if you can come. Looking forward to your news. Yours' Cas and Nicki

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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