The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the
prices
of copper
, nickel and zinc
changed compared with previous months in 2014. From the overview, average prices
of copper
and nickel went down, while
there was a slight increase in zinc
. Besides
, all the prices
remained stable from July to October.
To begin
with, it is crystal clear that Nickle's prices
suffered from the biggest fluctuation throughout the year. For the first six months of 2014, we can see a tremendous decrease in its price
, with 6% in January at first,
which was the highest among the three metals. The price
of nickel hit the bottom in June,
and went back up during the following six months, but the Remove the comma
apply
price
became the lowest compared to the start of the year.
Prices
of copper
and zinc
did not change a lot overall
. In February, the price
of zinc
increased by 3%, but after that, its price
continuously dropped down
. Change in Change preposition
apply
price
of copper
fluctuated in 2014. At
the beginning, the Change the preposition
In
price
increased by 2%, and at
the end, it remained almost 2%.Change preposition
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