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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand? What measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

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Lack of clean
water
 has always been considered
as
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one of the major factors
to
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 human health issues, resulting in deaths. Nowadays if we observe drinking
water
 is becoming scarce and the reason is the dramatic increase in population all over the world, leading to a worldwide problem. In
this
 given essay I will address the causes
due to
 which the demand for
water
 has increased.
Additionally
, I will
also
 throw light on the steps that government and
public
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 should take in order to conserve as much
water
 as they can. There are a few root causes for which the pupil demanding fresh
water
 had a boost.
Firstly
, the wastage of
water
. People use
water
 for their use
at
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 the same time
wastes
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 it in different activities without thinking twice
of
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 how much of a big hazard it may lead to.
For instance
, if we look at the service stations where people clean vehicles, experts estimate that 4 hours a day the
water
 tap was open yet wasting it and no one was being responsible enough to turn it off and think of saving
water
.
Secondly
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 the increasing population
also
 impact
this
 demand as the number of citizens
are
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 increasing
whereas
 the clean
water
 remains limited and with the passage of time will be finished e.g., if we look at the condition in Africa there is
very
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 limited amount of clean
water
 available to them. Every 1 in 3 kids is suffering from
illness
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 that
arise
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due to
 impurities in
water
, In the end, I will suggest that to put an end to
this
 disaster the government
as well as
 the public should come together and take steps to protect our world from
this
 problem and involve in activities
such
 as arranging campaigns and workshops to
educated
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 everyone to save
water
 and do not waste it. At the same
time
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 a few people from rural areas should be held responsible to make others understand
on
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how they can conserve
water
 and protect it from being exploited.
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