Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: .give details of how you and friends or family use the centre .explain why sport and leisure centre is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.

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Dear Sir, I have heard that a decision has been made on closing our local

sport

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centre

to save money . I am writing in regard to discuss the importance of the place for the local people.

First,

every person I have known in our

neighborhood

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is currently using

this

centre

. I have a yearly membership of the club and every Thursday I go to the tennis court with my friends. We are all satisfied with the playgrounds too. My sister takes her kids to play there every weekend .

While

watching them playing, she may have a cup of tea and read a book in the coffee shop.

Therefore

, we are all using the

centre

in a way and it has lots of advantages for us.

second,

since the community is fully equipped with various sites and it is a complete complex, there is no need to bother ourselves and find a place to go to. we can just visit the

centre

right away and use any sections that we need.

Moreover

, everybody says that after attending the

centre

, they feel very good and positive.

Thus

, the

centre

is helping us to have

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better mental health.

Lastly

, closing the

centre

can have negative impacts on local people. It can

disrupts

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people's daily routines because the

centre

is playing a huge role in our lives. we are all getting

use

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to it and without

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life can become hard since we do not know where to go for working out and entertainment . I would appreciate a reconsideration

about

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your decision . Yours faithfully, Mary Jane

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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