When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and way of life die out. it is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Traditional a
skills
and matters are disappering
because of our advanced Correct your spelling
disappearing
technology
invented every day in a nation. It makes no Sense
to still put efforts to save the old traditional ways. I totally disagree with it and will give my points below.
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Firstly
preserving the skills
you got from your ancestors is the biggest inheritage
a Correct your spelling
inheritance
person
can get. By keep
the ways alive you keep your ancestors alive. It can be said that you do it out of respect and to save your own existence. In Change the verb form
keeping
the
addition to it, in Correct article usage
apply
this
fast moving
world, it is now hard to differentiate between people. Add a hyphen
fast-moving
Secondly
, you have to preserve the culture of your nation and the community. This
is where you look different and unique. Saving culture is protecting your children from the western
culture. Capitalize word
Western
For example
, few
years ago a Change the article
a few
person
in China was watering his fields with the
really old methods,Correct article usage
apply
Correct word choice
and
person
came and asked him to use the
new Correct article usage
a
technology
. The first person
replied, it may be easy to use new technology
but this
is how many Lord teaches me to do it.
Thirdly
, the use and advancement of technology
is making people weak day by day. The more you rely on some outer source to work for you or either
help you Correct determiner usage
apply
is
the more you get weak mentally Unnecessary verb
apply
as well as
physically. Last
but not least, technology
is changing the Speed of life. it is more confusion and drama now than any
previous period. Change preposition
in any
Whereas
keeping the skills
you learn from your future will help you physically and also
put peace in your mind. For instance
, 50 years ago people were more happy and charming than they are now.
To conclude
the gold we get from our ancestors Are these skills
and way of life. we should not forget this
in the search of
modern and fake money.Change preposition
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