An Australian friend is coming to visit you and it will be his/her birthday during the vist write a letter to your friend Say how you feel about the visit Suggest what you could do on his/her birthday Ask what your friend thinks of this idea

Dear Raman, I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am so excited to hear, you are coming to India after 5 years. Your happiness and enjoyment would be because I am getting vacation for 20 days. So, I decided to go to some locations in as r to our areas that are newly added to our city. we can Celebrate your birthday here with our class friends which will make our Celebration more joyful and memorable. We all can enjoy ourselves together and recall the old moments that we did in school and college time. These are plans that I think for your birthday and trip, I hope will like them if not, please suggest to me how we can make your special day better. Waiting eagerly for your reply. Your best regards, Shelly
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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