Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more in education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that youth is an asset for the country's development in the future,

therefore

it is genuinely important to build the adolescent’s knowledge. In the meantime, there is some opinion that stands for the government needs to be focused on educating adults who need

education

instead

of the youth. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement that we government need to invest more in elder

education

. In

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particular essay, I will elaborate

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consideration of my views.

To begin

with, it needs to realize that

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of

education

for adults could be low

due to

the limited access for them to pursue an

education

particularly in the previous decade with a minimum facility from the country,

for instance

in the rural area.

Therefore

, it leads them to the low

opportunity

for having a job that impacts their economy and they do not have enough money for their family. As an effect

As a result

of

this

situation, they even can not they cannot afford to send their children

to go

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to school. It will make the cycle of poverty in the family

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and perpetuate/continue/persist.

On the other hand

, if there is a public policy on enlarging the

opportunity

for

education

access for the elderly.

For example

, an

education

to develop soft skills

such

as Reading, Basic Mathematics, and Basic Digital or Information Technology

Education

it will help them

to

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broaden their competencies and can give them new skills which can be used

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them

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to apply for a job

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the

opportunity

to them will rise up because of the competencies that they have. Their life will be better than before, and they can

fulfill

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their family’s primary needs because of the cash that they get from their jobs.

This

policy

also

can help to decrease the poverty number in the country. In conclusion, it is important for the government in investing the

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education

access to help them have a good life for their family and so on.

In addition

, an

opportunity

for adults

in getting

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knowledge can impact the country’s development in the case of poverty as well.