The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter: •Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party • Explain why you won’t be able to attend the party • Give details of a plan to see Chris at different time Dear Mr. and Mrs. Collins,

#parents #australian #friend #chris #surprise #birthday #party #chris’s #•say #won’t #plan #time #mr #mrs #collins

I am writing to send my apologies that I will not be able to take part in Chris’s birthday

party

. I think that Chris will enjoy the

party

because he has

such

a thoughtful and kind parent that has decided to plan a

party

and invite his friends. On top of that, I am sure he will be proud of you for creating

such

an amazing chance for him to be happy and have fun with his lovely friends. I am sorry to say that I cannot join

this

birthday

party

since I have a very important job interview in a company

that is

a valuable opportunity for me to get employed. What’s more, if I get the job, I am sure that I will have a high position which will provide job security and financial opportunities.

Although

I, unfortunately, cannot attend the

party

, I will send a message to Chris to set a time and meet each other at the park, and I will apologize for not coming to

this

gathering.

However

, I will send a worthy gift to him beforehand. I look forward to your reply. Best regards, Kambiz Pirzad

Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on Sat Jul 29 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Greeting and closing

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Clear and correct grammar

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