Many parents are unhappy because of the increasing amount of violence in their children by computer games, TV programs, and other leisure activities. How harmful are these for children? Discuss possible solutions.

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contact is dengorace. In my
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opinion
, I consider that
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parents
should care
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them
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kids and help them to
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reduce
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attintion toward
violence
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games
.
Tobegin
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To begin
with, violent
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programmes
programs
and
games
have
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effect on young age people and
this
made the
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majority
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of parents
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angry
about
this
. In other word,
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toddlers
toddler
who spend almost
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their
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day
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a day
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on harmful activities
such
as war
games
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this
and
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imitate
it in
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their
the
actual world.
In addition
, parents and adult siblings should invest
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them
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time as a family and fill it with outside activities like going for hikes, playing actual
games
, and
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for courses.
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, new
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articles encourage
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adults
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to build strong relationships with their
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children
and limit
them
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time on TV and
games
. In conclusion, to
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avoid
aggressive
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behaves
careing
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caring
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giving
a
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strong action are
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the best
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solutions.
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