When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of kife die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
By developing
technology
, communities will lose their ancient culture. Some believe that it is not necessary to keep them alive but in my opinion, it is very important to know about our history and traditions
. In this
, essay I am going to talk about my opinion widely.
It seems that people
in developed countries do not need to have traditions
because they can afford whatever they need with modern facilities. For example
, people
around the World, used to use public telephones in the street. But nowadays, everyone has their own cell phone so public telephones are no longer useful. But in Great Britain, especially in London, the public telephone booth is the symbol of London and they are used as a city design. These telephones are attractive to tourists and recently the British government has decided to use them as public phone chargers. I also
believe that is
a good idea to revive the tradition and make a facility of this
for modern people
.
Technology
should lead to having
a better lifestyle. What if the old tradition Unnecessary verb
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also
works in the same way? What I am trying to say is that some traditions
are useful especially these days when people
are busy and do not have enough time for workout activities. For example
, Japan is well-reputed for technology
but they have kept their culture and traditions
alive as well. For example
, their tea ceremonies. It seems that traditions
are tourist attractions which can be very useful for making a profit for the people
of a society.
To sum up
, it seems that by developing technology
the need of
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traditions
will disappear. But it can make money for the government and people
by attracting tourists to the country and it could be useful to design the city and remember people
how they used to live. In somehow it could help to complete their modern facilities.Submitted by minna.alzd on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite