The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter ·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party ·explain why you won't be able to attend the party ·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Evans,
I was very glad to receive
invitation
to the surprise party of my friend. As I know him well enough to predict his reaction, I no doubt, that Add an article
an invitation
this
is going be a memorable day for him. Moreover
, I anticipate lots of birthday pictures to be posted by him on social media pages.
Unfortunately, I have a planned trip to my hometown on those days and will be out of town starting next Monday. I asked my parents if I could stay with Grandpa, as he is always glad to see me but got a negative answer to that proposal.
However
, I bought a gift for Chris and I'm planning to present it after my arrival. If it is possible I would like to come to your place on Saturday and surprise my friend personally. I'm pretty sure this
is going to be a unique pleasure to
him.
I hope Change preposition
for
this
will be acceptable to you,
Yours sincerely,
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task response
Ensure clear and direct responses to each part of the task. Use specific details to explain why you won't be able to attend the party and provide a detailed plan to see Chris at a different time.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas to create a smoother flow between sentences and paragraphs. Use transition words and phrases to improve cohesion and coherence.