Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Give details how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sport and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, After greetings, I am writing

this

letter to you with regard to the latest news about closing the sports and leisure

centre

. I would like you to be informed that

the

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whole

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apply

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residents

in

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of

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the city are concerned about

this

for several reasons.

Firstly

, I would like to clarify that we use

this

centre

for family

gathering

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and

friends

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meetings,

moreover

, some would enjoy their time watching their children practice physical activities there

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therefore

we immensely need

this

centre

to

be exist

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here.

Secondly

,

this

place gives us a sense of community that we belong to

this

city,

additionally

, the local charity groups use

this

centre

for some events

such

as; collecting donations and delivering these to those in need,

hence

, if you take

such

a decision, it would affect us badly. Closing

this

centre

would be a disaster for both

olders

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older

and

minors

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residents, and

as a result

of

this

children will lose the place where they practice sports

therefore

they would spend their leisure time playing phone games which are unfavourable to their health. I hope that you will withdraw

this

decision for the welfare of public benefits. Yours

sincerley

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sincerely

, John Adam