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The bar chart shows the number of children in two different age groups in an average class in different countries.

The bar chart shows the number of children in two different age groups in an average class in different countries.
#bar #children #two #age #groups #class #countries
The bar graph illustrates the
number
 of
students
on
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 an average
class
 at different ages (9 and 13) in different countries. It is clearly shown in the graph that
Hong
Kong
 and
Japan
 had the most 
number
 of
students
 at the
age
 of 9;
Hong
Kong
 had 35
number of
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students
 per
class
 at
age
 9
while
Japan
 had
moreover
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31
number of
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students
 per
class
.
However
,
Japan
 had an
increase
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number
 of
students
 to about 24 but the
students
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 in
Hong
Kong
 dropped
at
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 31
students
 per
class
 at the
age
13
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of 13
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. The United States and the Global Average had an equal
number
 of 23
students
 per
class
 at the
age
 of 9 but fell by
age
 13. Russia,
on the other
hand
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 got the lowest
number
 of
students
 both at
age
 9 and 13, having only 10 and 9
students
 per
class
accordingly
.
Lastly
, at the
age
 of
9
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, 9
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there were more
students
 in
Hong
Kong
 but as the
students
 reached the
age
 of 13, most of the
students
were
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studied in
Japan
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, class, hong, kong, japan, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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