The given diagram clearly depicts the step-by-step process of carbonated drink production.
The
given
diagram Verb problem
apply
clearly
depicts the step-by-step process of carbonated drink production.
Looking from an Rephrase
below clearly
overall
perspective, the production requires multiple machines and involves 5 main stages which begin with filtering raw water
and culminate in delivering boxes in which fizzy drinks are put to supermarkets for consume
.
In the first Replace the word
consumption
stage
, raw water
passes through from
the filter and Change preposition
apply
mixed
with Add a missing verb
is mixed
water
softener and other chemicals. In the evaporation and carbonation Add an article
a water
stage
, with the help of electric heaters, water
is heated and then
goes through the cooling pipe. During this
step, carbon dioxide is added to water
and mixture
goes to Correct article usage
the mixture
mixing
tank in which syrup ,flavour and colouring are added to Correct article usage
a mixing
water
. In the subsequent Correct article usage
the water
stage
, again
drinks are filtered and filled Rephrase
apply
to
Change preposition
into
the
either bottles or cans. In the Remove the article
apply
last
stage
, filled bottles and cans are packaged and sent to supermarkets where drinks are sold and consume
.Wrong verb form
consumed
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