The graph compares the number of people who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.
The graph compares the number of
people
who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.
Overall
, the National Gallery was by far the most popular venue after 2000, although
the Indigenous Art Centre also
saw a rise in visitor numbers. While
fewer people
went to the aquarium and zoo over the two decades, museum attendance remained fairly stable.
In 1996, the aquarium was the main attraction, with over 500,000 people
coming through the doors. Slightly fewer went to the museum in
that year, and the zoo and National Gallery welcomed approximately 300,000 Change preposition
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people
each. Although
the Indigenous Art Centre attracted barely 80 thousand people
in 1996, it then
enjoyed a huge rise in popularity over the next 10 years, peaking at almost 400,000 visitors in 2004 and reaching a similar figure in 2016. By that year, also
, the National Gallery had seen an unparalleled increase in visitors to almost 1 million.
Meanwhile, over the period shown, aquarium attendance plummeted by about 400,000, going from the most to the least visited venue. The zoo's figure fell substantially as well, though less dramatically, while
the museum saw little deviation from around 450,000 annual visitors.Submitted by sonyso on
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