📌 Task 1 Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter: • mention why you are writing • explain why you would like to work from home • say how this can benefit you and the company

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request permission to

work

remotely for my job.I hear you are allowing other employees to

work

remotely. I would

also

like to

work

remotely.Because it is convenient for me, I am very busy at the moment.

However

, I will try to

work

remotely from

home

for six months.It is very necessary for me and I have important

work

to do.

Firstly

, the reason I want to

work

from

home

is that I cannot spend much time with my family.

In addition

this

, my monthly salary is very low. It is not enough to

work

from

home

. Because of these problems, I prefer to

work

from

home

for six months. It is very important and convenient for me.

Secondly

, there is a construction going on next to our office, which I do not like because it disrupts my

work

and makes me unable to concentrate.

For example

, you cannot

work

if someone disturbs you

while

you are working.

This

will have a negative effect on the development of the

company

and the result of

such

company

will be lower than other companies, without a doubt. Based on what I said above, I want to contribute to the development of

this

company

. I

work

more when I

work

remotely at

home

. There are no inconveniences.I will continue to

work

in peace at

home

, not only on new innovative ideas but

also

on new investments.I believe that

this

will certainly lead to great profits and great victories for the

company

. I hope you do not mind me working from

home

.You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or a fax. I look forward to hearing from you! Yours sincerely, Shahodat.

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task response

The letter should be more formal in tone and focused on the specific request to work from home for six months. Clear and direct expressions are recommended.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the organization of ideas. Each paragraph should discuss a specific point related to why you would like to work from home and how it can benefit you and the company.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

286 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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