The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter . Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party . Explain why you won't be able to attend the party . Give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr. and Madam Zare, I hope to find you well. I thank you for inviting me to Chris’s surprise party, I’m sure it will be one of the best parties that he had.

Also

, please accept my warmest congratulations. In fact,

last

year when we lived at the dormitory, we had a nice habit that surprised our roommate because of their birthday, but when it was his birthday unfortunately had a bad illness and had to stay in hospital, in result we could not hold his party. So, I’m sure that

this

party is really important to him and he will really enjoy it. I am writing

this

letter that apologize because I am going to take an exam the same day as his celebration.

In addition

, my university is located in another city and it is quite far, I am so sorry but I will not attend with you. I have some plans that I can visit your nice family, I can able to see you

at the end

of May weather I will join you on the 15th of June. If these days are good for you, please

will

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tell me. I hope you consider my situation and accept my apologies. Best Regards, Ali

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better organization.

task response

Fully address all points of the task, including the reason for not attending the party and the plan to see Chris at a different time.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

207 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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