In many countries, young people should attend school or college till 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It has been observed that the statute claims that young people should attend school or university till 18. Despite the numerous arguments surrounding
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topic, my viewpoint on
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issue is that
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of
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matter surpass its possible demerits. The first benefit is that it exposes us to
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new things and
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our horizons. We may
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be motivated to challenge existing
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norms and values, and even generate breakthrough innovations and achievements.
Secondly
, in
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environment, youngsters can fully appreciate
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and richness of different cultures
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and can adopt the perspective of the party when encountering problems. Allowing children to think about problems from multiple perspectives can improve their
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skills and creativity. Multi-dimensional thinking can
also
enhance their critical thinking ability, and will no longer adopt a simplistic or biased view of problems.
However
, there is a disadvantage
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that paying extra for accommodation or communication, may exert unexpected financial pressure upon students far from home, especially those in developing regions, where the income level and living
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low.
This
may cause them to suffer from financial stress and hardship, which could affect their quality of life and well-being. Fortunately, there are some measures we can take to improve
this
alarming situation. One of the possible solutions to
this
problem is to change people’s mindsets. They should not be constrained by their habits or impulses, but rather
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different ways to connect with others, or reduce housing costs,
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free online video
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,
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government aid. By doing so,
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can avoid putting themselves
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huge stress under living expenses and communication
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. In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of
this
matter largely surpass the drawbacks, as it possesses remarkable merits and demerits are manageable.
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