Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends were you stayed at their house. They have just send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends, in your letter: Thank them for the holday and the photos Explain why didn't write earlier Invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Jack and Maria, It's really great to hear from you, and I'm sorry that I haven'
t
been able to contact you until now. First of all, I can'
t
even say how much I missed you both because those two weeks that we spent together were incredible and I don'
t
know how to say thank you for making those great memories for me.
Besides
, the photos you sent me became another reason to remember the wonderful
time
I spent in your house, and again thanks for being so kind to send them as well. After I came back home, I encountered an issue with regard to my job, so I had to double the
time
I used to work in the company to compensate for my absence;
otherwise
, there was a great chance of losing my job.
This
is why I didn'
t
have any
time
to write to you sooner. By the way, I would be so glad if you could come to London
this
time
and I promise that we can
also
enjoy spending
time
together
this
time
in my city. I can'
t
wait to see you again Best Wishes, Arash
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task response
Provide more specific details and examples about the holiday and the photos.
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