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In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water caused by both industry and construction. What are some of these problems? And what solutions could be provided to prevent this?

#countries #quality #air #water #industry #construction
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 is an assortment of evidence that the progression of air pollution and other global disasters
rise
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 every day,
due to
 the production of chemical resources and
building
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 of establishments. There are
plethora
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 of issues that have to be considered,
such
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inner city
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 fabrications, construction and so on. One of the solutions is
the
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expanding the distance between cities and fuel
productions
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production
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. It is
a
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common knowledge that because of the extreme amount of
wastes
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waste
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 from manufacturing oil and gas, our world struggles with contamination of
an
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 atmosphere, as far as many fuel fabrications
located
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 in
inner
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city
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cities
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. To soften, authorities have to take risks to partly rebuild or remove production facilities
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150
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of 150
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kilometers
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 apart from urban areas and small towns. Yes, it may take several decades but the state of health of locals is essential.
For instance
,
according to
 the AQI (Air Quality Index)
reports
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, in Kazakhstan, city Aksay, the level of AQI is higher than
Karaganda
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in Karaganda
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,
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 because all manufacturers are located far away from Aksay,
while
 in Karaganda five mining factories are built
in
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inside of the province. Another decision that should be
maintained
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 is to switch petroleum
cars
 to electric
cars
. Since electric
cars
 waste less carbon dioxide and other harmful emissions
while
 driving.
Moreover
 to build
such
 advanced engines, synthetic materials and other chemical resources are not necessary.
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, to produce Zeekr electric
cars
, ultra-modern machines with less
wastes
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waste
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 are used.
To conclude
, there are various solutions
according
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to
the
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air pollution, like building industries outside of the cities,
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and convert
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convert
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converting
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 diesel
cars
 to electric
cars
. I
strigently
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strongly
 believe that if with patience, authorities will invest
on
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in
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 building industries in rural areas,
country
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a country
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 at the same time will enhance economically and naturally.
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