You have just spent a week with your friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Emma, I am writing to tell you how happy I am to have

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trip with you. Thanks a lot for allowing me to be part of

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awesome journey. My holiday would be colourless if I had not gone there. I will send our photos to you via email tomorrow. I wish we could spend another vacation together next time. Unfortunately, after I had gotten home, I realized my wallet was missing. I think I left it

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your house

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showed my ID photos to your sister when we had

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lunch. Would you like to find

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send it to my dorm

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? You can send it by instant courier to White Roses Dorm 3C. I will pay for the

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costs when he arrives. I am sorry to burden you with

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you and

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I will see you soon. Best Regards, Aliya

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

158 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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