The chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the data about Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
duration
of telephone calls in the Correct article usage
the duration
Uk
, between three different lines from 1995 to 2002.
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UK
Overall
, the local fixed line
was the most common one used at that time. The number of minutes
for National and international- fixed line
and mobiles increased, but the local- fixed Fix the agreement mistake
lines
line
peaked and dropped.
Firstly
, from the year 1995, the local- fixed line
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was
increased Unnecessary verb
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upto
90 Correct your spelling
up to
minutes
(billions) by 1999 and declined to 70 minutes
and the end of 2002. Secondly
, looking at the National and international- fixed which gradually increased from the duration of 35 minutes
to 60 minutes
by the end.
On the other hand
, the
mobiles( all calls) showed Correct article usage
apply
the
drastic change from almost zero to 45 Correct article usage
a
billions
by 2002.Change to singular
billion
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