You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are in good health and in high spirits. My name is Amandeep Singh. I have seen your advertisement in "

Time

of India" dated 1st November 2023 that you are looking for a suitable teacher who will teach English to your two children for a year. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in

this

position. I have good experience in teaching skills and

also

got opportunities to impart coaching to many students in the English language as I have an excellent command of

this

language. I believe that I can hand your children which will be beneficial for them in their academics. I can

also

provide training for extracurricular skills in their leisure

time

which will help them build a fair understanding of different aspects apart from daily study routine. I am

also

good at badminton and other sports which helps them to get engaged in sports too. I want to visit Australia next month as I have enrolled in a Business Communication course and got admission to a reputed college. I have spare

time

in the evening from 2 pm till 6 pm to spend

time

with your wards. If I get the opportunity to provide training that will be fruitful for them in their fields. Hope you find my details useful as per your requirements. Looking forward positive response from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Amandeep

Submitted by deep.amans86 on Mon Nov 13 2023

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task response

Provide more specific examples and experiences related to teaching and extracurricular activities.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single central idea and use transition words to improve coherence.

lexical resource

Expand your range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and fluently.

grammatical range

Incorporate a variety of complex sentence structures and pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

235 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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