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Production of vegetables in millions of tonnes (Mt), 2012.

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The table gives detailed information about
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how
 many consumption of vegetables
recorded
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 in 2012. In general, it is evident that
potatoes
, cabbages and
onions
experienced
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 in
a
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different countries, namely
Irland
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Ireland
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,
Spain
,
China
,
Russia
 and
Brazil
.
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Moreover
, it is worth noting that
China
 was a dominant figure
all
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 vegetables over the period.
Besides
 that, cabbages and
onions
 were
lowest
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figure
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 in
Brazil
 and
Spain
 respectively. In detail,
although
 the figure for
potatoes
were
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 9214
million
tons
, cabbages and
onions
 were 3187 and 2602
million
tons
 respectively. Production of
potatoes
 was a slight increase to 72
million
tons
than
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Russia
.
However
, in
Russia
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Russia,
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 initial point of
potatoes
were
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was
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 30
million
tons
. As for
Spain
 and
Brazil
 saw a noticeable rise to about 3
milion
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million
tonnnas
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tonnes
.
In contrast
, consumption of cabbage was more growth
vegitable
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vegetable
 in
chine
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china than
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then
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another countries
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. Of particular note is that
Russia
 reached
next
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 stage which is growing cabbage in 2012.
Following
this
,
in
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Irland obtained a negligible rise. Afterwards, cabbage recorded about 200mt in
Spain
. Focusing on the
onions
, it was about 4
million
tons
 in
Irland
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Ireland
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.
Furthermore
, in
Spain
 was no change
throught
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through
throughout
production
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the production
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 of
onions
 in 2012. As for
China
 was a
leader
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 trend even in
onions
 by 26 Mt.
Last
 but not least,
Russia
 reached one more next stage by 26.02 after
China
.
Brazil
 was a
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high
huge
 increase in
onions
 production about 1417 in 2012.
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