Your friend from oversea is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Tell them what they need to bring Tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting Warn them about somethings that might be challenging
Dear Sarah,
I'm so happy to receive your email that you and your family are
finally
coming Change preposition
to Toronto
Toronto
to visit me next month. I am writing to tell you about Change preposition
to Toronto
the
future plans during your stay and Change the word
your
also
give you some advice.
December, the month that you’ll be here, we’ll have heavy snow as you know probably. So bring some warm clothes and suitable boots. Don't forget to bring gloves. we'll be going to build a snowman at a festival which be
settled in our Change the verb form
is
neighborhood
.
As I mentioned above, right after the first snowfall, there will be a Snowman Festival in London Park. I believe it will be enjoyable Change the spelling
neighbourhood
especially
for your children. we will Add the comma(s)
, especially
also
go for
skiing in Edmond Change preposition
apply
village
which is one of the best ski resorts in the country. I know that you and your husband ski professionally. And Capitalize word
Village
finally
, I will book some tickets for the final match of the hockey tournament. It will be held in the central stadium and after the match, we can celebrate with the winner's fans who will stay at
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in
streets
and bars until midnight.
There are some challenging things that I want to tell you. First of Correct article usage
the streets
all
we might get stuck Add a comma
all,
in
home after the snow, so be ready mentally for that. Don’t worry I will store some necessary stuff like canned food and water. I Change preposition
at
also
suggest changing your money at
your home country because all the currency exchanges here get extra fees as a tax.
If you need more information, do not hesitate to contact me.
Best wishes,
SahebeChange preposition
in
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coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing could be more formal for the context of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to enhance coherence and clarity.
task achievement
Use a more suitable writing tone for a letter to a friend, considering the level of formality and friendliness.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite