The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans below display the site of an airport before and after development.

Overall

, the airport will be enlarged and new commercial areas will be added

as well as

gates

Also

added some facilities to help the travellers will be developed. New doors will be developed for departure and arrival. The café will be moved from the up-right corner to the left corner of the departure doors. The check-in will be changed from the left to the right side in the departure area,

also

, a bag drop area will be added in the place where the check-in is now. Several areas will be added to the arrival zone, all

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side, a place where individuals can hire cars in the right corner of the arrival doors, next to it, there will be an ATM and

besides

the customs and passport control, there will be another café. The walkway to get to the

gates

will be changed to a sky train, and

finally

, 10 new

gates

will be added, so there will be 18

gates

instead

of 8.

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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