In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building the live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?
People
in some countries are increasing their interest in the history
of building
or Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
house
they live in. I believe social media plays Fix the agreement mistake
houses
part
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a part
on
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in
this
phenomenon as many content
creator
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producing
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produce
content
about old historical building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
This
essay aims to investigate the reason behind this
phenomenon and the way people
doing
research on their Wrong verb form
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house
background.
Nowadays peopla
can Correct your spelling
people
easly
access historical Correct your spelling
easily
content
from social media, showing content
about history
now become populer
. Correct your spelling
popular
People
are interested in some historical channel which displays discovery investigations content
of old abandon
historical sites. Viewers become interested in that topic and Replace the word
abandoned
having
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have
personal
motivation to investigate their home. Add an article
the personal
For example
, in one of popular video content
, the content
creator found historical things such
as jewerly
that never known before. That kind of discovery has Correct your spelling
jewellery
succesfully
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successfully
attract
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attracted
people
to do the same things and takes
the benefits.
There are various research Correct subject-verb agreement
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method
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methods
which
used by the Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
. First,
they are trying to collect informations
based on Change the wording
information
pieces of information
document
of Fix the agreement mistake
documents
house
certificates which contain details about when the house
was built, the first owner and the specific map of the house
. Second,
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the eldery
eldery
could be Correct your spelling
elderly
beneficial
source of Add an article
a beneficial
informations
as they can share the story when the first time they Change the wording
information
pieces of information
live
in the Wrong verb form
lived
house
. Third,
people
also
can go to public museum
and do Fix the agreement mistake
museums
the
desk Correct article usage
apply
resarch
on the Correct your spelling
research
neighborhood
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neighborhood's
history
.
In conclusion, I believe people
are influenced by social media and content
creator
to find out their Fix the agreement mistake
creators
house
or building history
. They also
can use various methods to get the informations
they Change the wording
information
pieces of information
needed
which are looking at Wrong verb form
need
house
document
, listening to Fix the agreement mistake
documents
eldery
stories and Correct your spelling
elderly
go
to pubic Wrong verb form
going
museum
.Fix the agreement mistake
museums
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