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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them. Do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should they be allowed ?

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It is said that it is necessary for kids to understand the difference between
right
 and wrong at an early
age
. I agree with
this
 opinion.
Firstly
, teaching
right
 and wrong things to
childs
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 at their first ages would form their personality and
this
 leads to making them a better person in future.
Secondly
, if kids learn true and false at
early
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age
, they will do
perfect
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 and
accurate
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 in future and it will be helpful for society. Learning
right
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 things in
domestic
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a domestic
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 environment is better than facing
this
 in society at an older
age
. In my opinion, only verbal punishment can be allowed to teach good
manner
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 to children. I disagree with
hiting
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hitting
hiding
 and other ways of punishment.
Teacher
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 and parents should only talk to kids and explain
right
 and wrong. If
childs
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did
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 not listen to their mother and father or their
tracher
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teacher
tracker
then
 tutors can speak to them
agressively
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aggressively
.
To conclude
,
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 better character
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in elder
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age
 and
doing
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 perfectly in
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at
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future
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, children ought to be taught good and bad.
Also
, verbal punishment can only be allowed.
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