You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it, You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you
this
letter to request to work in our main head office of the company
which is situated in the USA, California for 6 months so I can contribute to the MNC company
.
Though, I have been working in this
company
as a project
manager for 10 years, and I came to know that our top researchers are planning to do a huge project
that I would like to work on the project
which can boost the company
's revenue by applying requires principles that have learnt in school.
I would like to remind you that you are not required to hire another employee instead
of me as I have some staff members who will be managing my tasks while
I am in the head office.
For your assistance, could you please arrange to spend some quality time working on the project
that I have been waiting for a long period in our main headquarters?
I look forward to seeing your response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Richard SmithSubmitted by patelhardik2199 on
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coherence cohesion
While your letter generally follows a clear structure, it would benefit from more logical transitions between ideas and paragraphs to improve flow and coherence.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and closing, but you could make your closing more impactful by summarizing your request or expressing anticipation for a positive outcome.
coherence cohesion
Try to maintain a single idea per paragraph. While you have distinct paragraphs, some ideas could be expanded on or divided to enhance clarity.
task achievement
To achieve a higher score, ensure that you fully address all parts of the task. Expand more on how your work could be managed in your absence and possibly suggest a plan for the transition.
task achievement
Your tone is mostly suitable for a letter to a manager; it's formal and polite. However, using more persuasive language could strengthen your argument for why you should be allowed to work at the head office.