Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Some
people
are of the belief that we should generate a new form of linguistic speaking in order to communicate on a global scale in a more effective manner. In this
essay
I will discuss why there are more cons than pros to Add a comma
essay,
such
a suggestion and form a conclusion.
Firstly
, the invention of a new language
would create an even playing field between all the nations of the world. Often, languages that are spoken and used in the majority of nations, such
as English are described as being virtually impossible to learn if it is not your native tongue. Furthermore
, many people
who speak broken English or inadequate forms of this
language
,
may feel as if they are less superior than those who are fluent. Remove the comma
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Additionally
, there may be some unconscious bias between those who are fluent and those who are not. Therefore
, the creation of a new universal verbal dialect would unite people
of all backgrounds together and eliminate any prejudices or inferiority complexes that are unconsciously held. Secondly
, there are a variety of issues that not only damage
local populations but Verb problem
apply
also
societies as a whole. For instance
, the challenge of climate change and rising carbon dioxide levels is an intricate matter and every nation has their
own role to play. If there was a universal spoken word organized within each society, Correct pronoun usage
its
then
many would feel more included and inclined to tackle this
problem.
On the other hand
, the idea of fabricating a new dialect indirectly equates to the loss of culture and history of a land. This
means that,
there are certain linguistic styles that are a direct representative of that Remove the comma
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countries
culture, Change noun form
country's
people
and history. If these were to be replaced by a new form of speaking then
much of that countries
own idioms would be lost. Change noun form
country's
This
has been shown in many places already, such
as Pakistan where the younger generation are
beginning to use Urdu more than English which, will eventually lead to the loss of a culture and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
.In addition
to this
, actively producing and learning a new language
requires self-dedication, time and perseverance. It is unrealistic for such
an idea to become an international success as many will not have the time, dedication or willingness to do so.
In conclusion, there seems
to be more disadvantages than advantages Change the verb form
seem
for
the invention of a new Change preposition
to
language
. These include,
the loss of history and uniqueness of a land and its Remove the comma
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people
as well as
, the dedication and time needed to learn something new.Submitted by abeera2012 on
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