A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. Give detail of the course you took at the University. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.
Hello Aslı,
I am writing to share my thoughts about the business course at the university that I took
last
year. I believe my past experience makes me an expert in this
field, and I want to emphasize that this
course can add value to your abilities, particularly in management and marketing.
The university boasts an impressive faculty, with one of the teachers receiving an award last
year. The educational standards are exceptionally high. Additionally
, its location close to the city center
offers numerous shops and restaurants nearby.
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centre
However
, during the summer, the hotel might be crowded, so I recommend booking your accommodation at least five months in advance. Additionally
, I suggest choosing a lesson about the supply chain; the teacher is incredible and provides many examples of best practices.
While
I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my letter after your incredible lessons. If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Kind Regards,Submitted by salihzekikoni on
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task achievement
The response overall completes the task, but it could have provided more detailed advice on the application process as the friend requested.
task achievement
Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter, especially in the closing statements to ensure it aligns with the semi-formal tone of the task.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear, with a logical flow from one idea to the next; however, consideration to paragraphing can enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
Include a more formal closing to align with the expectations of the letter format.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to ensure the letter is easy to follow and coherent.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite