Some people think the government should be responsible for solving the pollution poblems which result from heavy traffic. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays people have to face with harmful consequences of air

pollution

because of vehicle

traffics

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traffic

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on the roads, and I totally

conform

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agree

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that authorities should be responsible for resolving

this

issue.

However

, I believe that every person

suppose

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is supposed

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to be answerable for solving

this

problem. It is undeniable that

an

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the

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amount of

cars

increased enormously in the

last

years, and

as a

result

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result,

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the level of harmful emissions

raised

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has risen

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consequently

. A commonly held belief is that the government

suppose

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is supposed

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to solve

this

obstacle, one of the main reasons behind

that is

their ability to monitor vehicle

traffics

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traffic

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.

Moreover

, the authorities could ban the movement

for

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of

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some vehicles

in

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on

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certain

part

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parts

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of the roads.

For instance

,

in

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apply

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many

Europian

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European

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cities introduced the prohibition of

driveway

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driveways

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for private

cars

in some overload districts.

For

this

reason, citizens have to take

a public transport

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public transport

a means of public transport

a mode of public transport

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and leave their own

cars

to reach the

locaton

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location

. Certainly,

these kind

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this kind

these kinds

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of

method

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methods

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should help to overcome

pollution

problems.

On the other hand

, people cannot just totally move

this

problem to the government,

moreover

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moreover,

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society

suppose

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supposes

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to take responsibility as well. Citizens in

development

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developing

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countries become

welthier

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wealthier

, and we can see that some of them have two or more vehicles per family. And

as a result

, the

pollution

problem become worse. I believe that to solve

this

issue every person

suppose

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is supposed

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to care about the environment. We should use our own

transports

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transport

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as

less

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little

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as possible.

In particular

, in

Sweden

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Sweden,

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the majority of inhabitants prefer to use public

transports

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transport

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or bicycles

instead

of private

cars

.

Moreover

, no one forces them to do it, it is their conscious decision to contribute

reducing

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to reducing

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air

pollution

. And

as a

result

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result,

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Sweden

remains

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has remained

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in recent years one of the

eco-friendly

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most eco-friendly

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country

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countries

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in the world. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that

issue

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the issue

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of traffic problems is severe and not only government but everyone should be responsible to

adress

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address

it.