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he parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter . Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party . Explain why you won't be able to attend the party . Give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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am writing to express my pleasure for Chris's birthday occasions. I am glad that both of you remember me. Definitely, Chris is going to have fun. Since she is the kind of a person who loves gatherings with friends and family to live life to the fullest. Unfortunately,
last
 year
due to
 a tragic accident she went through trauma and even did not celebrate her birthday
last
 year. Let me explain my situation in more detail earlier I was certain that I would join her, but the problem starts with my IELTS examination schedule
this
 month. As I am applying for Australian immigration it is
therefore
 mandatory to have IELTS results with 7 bands in each module as English proficiency proof which is one of the requirements for immigration.
As a result
, I will not be able to attend the ceremony.
However
, our close-knit friends have planned the New Year's Eve celebrations. we will be watching a movie, eating an expensive dinner at a luxurious hotel and partying together. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Haris Khan
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Greeting and Closing
Include a proper salutation at the beginning and an appropriate closing at the end of your letter to enhance formality and structure.
Logical Structure
Ensure the letter has a logical flow by organizing ideas clearly and using connectors appropriately.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Stick to one idea per paragraph to maintain clarity and coherence.
Complete Response
Fully address all parts of the prompt, and avoid omitting details requested in the task.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter according to the context of the correspondence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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