the bar chart bellow show information about expenditure.
The table below
illustrate
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illustrates
category
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categories
age
under 18, aged over 60, average income
per person
and population below poverty
line) in the USA.
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the poverty
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except
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especially
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average
income
per person
that
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which
by
far higher than Change preposition
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other
countries.
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of
age
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the population
poverty
line which made up 9%, followed by Add an article
the poverty
avarage
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average
income
per person
and averege
over 60 Correct your spelling
average
that
were 17,000 $ and 8% respectively.
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california
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California
avarage
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average
income
per person
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compared
Utal
and Florida. About population below Correct your spelling
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poverty
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the poverty
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line
lin
, California is around double higher than Utal (16%)
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Floida
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Florida
age
over 60 accounted for 23% which was ahead of Age
under 18 that
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small
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a smal
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propportion
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