A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend a book called "Azadi-e-Hind" written by Abdul Kalam Azad a renowned freedom activist that encompasses the story of
the
Indian independence for that reason I am Correct article usage
apply
huge
admirer of it.
To start with, As the Indian subcontinent was a former British colony, there was a need for Add an article
a huge
national
freedom movement, that served as the primary cause of the Indian National Congress formation. Luckily, Gandhi, Nehru, Patel, and Azad were among the top-tier Correct article usage
a national
leadership
that provided the road map to it. Replace the word
leaders
Moreover
, The main agendas at that time were to get independence, discourge
external invasion like Japan, and Correct your spelling
discourage
discouraged
last
but not least keep India united. In this
regard
they came up with Add a comma
regard,
great
idea known as the cabinet mission where only finance, defence, and foreign affairs were federal matters and all Correct article usage
a great
others
powers were Correct quantifier usage
other
transfered
to states.
Correct your spelling
transferred
Although
, its
been 77 years Replace the word
it's
it is
yet
there are numerous confusions among the citizens of India, Pakistan, and Bangladesh related to our independence. Correct word choice
apply
Therfore
, Correct your spelling
Therefore
this
is definitely going to answer many of their questions.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ben JohnSubmitted by kashikaranti on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains one clear main idea and that your ideas progress logically from one to the next.
task achievement
Develop your ideas more thoroughly. Expand on how the book influenced you personally and how it might influence others, beyond general statements.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices accurately to manage the relation between ideas and paragraphs.