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The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
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The bar chart provided data
of
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 the total of minutes number of telephone calls that
divided
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 into
three
 categories, Local-fixed
line
, National and international-fixed
line
, and mobiles (all calls) from 1995 to 2002 in the UK.
Overall
,
Local-fixed
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the Local-fixed
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line
 predominated the highest number most of the
times
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time
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.
By contrast
, the mobile (all calls) showed
the
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stable
result
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results
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 in low quantities. As can be seen, a volatile result
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produced
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at
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a
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 local-fixed
line
 figure,
on
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 the initial
three
 years from 1995, 1996, and 1997 it slightly increased by 10
billion
 each year.
Whereas
, there is a small gap between 1998 and 1999 around two
billion
.
Moreover
, only
need
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one year more it
show
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shows
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 a continued declining trend
approximately
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at
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10
billion
in
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every year for the
last
three
 years from 2000, 2001, and 2002.
On the other hand
, compared with
three
 other factors, a contrast chart showed at
mobiles
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mobile
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 (all calls)
result
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results
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. It
generate
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 the lowest start growth number roughly at five
billion
at
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in
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 1995.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, for the rest of the
yeear
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year
 it prevailed
consistency
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 stable until
at
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in
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 2002 it reached
the
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a
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 peak
about
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of about
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 45
billion
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, line, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phone
  • long-distance
  • international call
  • local call
  • peak
  • plateau
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • dramatically
  • gradually
  • significantly
  • minute
  • usage
  • tariff
  • call charges
  • call volume
  • shift in preferences
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancement
  • speculate
  • projection
  • statistical data
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