The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.

The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
The line graph gives information about
export
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the export
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of
rubber
ducks during the 4-year period starting from 2013.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that
exporting
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the exporting
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of
rubber
in Europe and
United
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the United
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Kingdom grew
up
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while
in America it witnessed a decrease over the timeframe.
Exports
of
rubber
ducks in Europe in 2013 started at 30000
units
. After that, the figure decreased until 2015 and increased steadily by 2016 to approximately 35000
units
.
However
, from 2016 to 2017
exports
peaked ending at around 40000
units
.
In contrast
, the proportion of
rubber
ducks
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exports
from the United Kingdom in 2013 amounted to 20000
units
and dipped slightly, but
then
rose somewhat in 2015 to 25000
units
.
Subsequently
,
exports
grew steadily to over 29000
units
in 2016 and picked at 39000
units
by 2017. Regarding
the
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America, export figures accounted for 10000
units
in 2013. After
that
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it rose steadily to 15000
units
and levelled
of
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till 2016. Following that the figure finished, experiencing a marginal decline by 7000
units
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rubber, exports, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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