You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour.You have not been able to speak to your neighbor about this. Write a letter to this neighbour.In your letter •Explain the problem •Suggest a solution •Say what action will you take if the situation does not improve
Dear: Sir or Madam
I am writing in order to complain about the voices and other problems which
is
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are
come
from your house all the time.
My first Wrong verb form
coming
complain
is that Replace the word
complaint
yours
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your
dog
makes my home dirty and at nights
does not let us sleep by barking without any Fix the agreement mistake
night
reasons
.Sometimes your Fix the agreement mistake
reason
dog
is dangerous for my family.And once your dog
almost bite
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bit
son
.
My second concern with you is that after you leave your house for work your son
have
a party with his friends and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
at
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on
this
occasion will continue until daylight.Also
, I asked your son
to stop the party and music but he disrespected me and did what he want
.Not only your Wrong verb form
wanted
dog
but also
your son
made me furious.
I respect you personally however
if this problems
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this problem
these problems
will happen
again I will take legal action Wrong verb form
happens
with
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against
police
.
I look forward to your reply and resolution to my problem.
Correct article usage
the police
Your
faithfully
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Yours
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greeting and closing
Ensure you begin with a proper greeting, addressing your neighbour by their name if known, or with 'Dear Neighbour' if unknown. A formal 'Dear Sir or Madam' is too impersonal for a neighbour, and the colon is not appropriate in this context.
logical structure
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly by dedicating a single paragraph to each complaint, with a clear introductory sentence to signal the topic of the paragraph. This will enhance the logical structure of your letter.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a respectful and polite tone throughout the letter, even when discussing problems. Instead of showing anger ('made me furious'), aim to express your concerns calmly.
greeting and closing
Conclude the letter with a sign-off that matches the overall tone of the letter, such as 'Kind regards' or 'Sincerely' followed by your full name.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure that you clearly suggest a solution to each problem you mention. Although you highlight the issues, you do not propose specific actions your neighbour could take to rectify them.
complete response
Articulate the actions you will take if the situation does not improve with a clear explanation of the steps, such as 'I will reluctantly feel compelled to involve local authorities to find a peaceful solution'. This conveys your intention without sounding overly threatening.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite