The local council asks you to write a letter about how to improve local tourism facilities. Write a letter back and: - describe present facilities - benefit from tourism - your suggestions
Dear Council Members,
I am Tajinder Singh, a resident of Morning Star Drive, Brampton. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to my region and request you to provide some additional facilities to improve tourism.
To commence with, there are many tourist attractions in my locality such
as beaches, clubs, museums and historical buildings to explore the beauty of the area
with an appropriate connectivity of transportation with downtown. Moreover
, this
area
has some three-star hotels to stay along with
good-quality services.
It is needless to state, good tourism supports and empowers the economy of the country through job creation for the local community. Apart from that it also
prompts cultural exchange as foreigners interact with locals and learn about their culture. So, I would like to give some suggestions, such
as there should be a committee for keeping our area
clean and green and I think a help room is also
a necessity where visitors can give feedback and collect information about this
area
as these places are not just visited by the locals but also
attract foreign visitors.
If the council needs any further
assistance, a reply by telephone would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by tajinder.panag on
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coherence cohesion
To enhance the logical structure, ensure each paragraph follows a clear progression from the previous one, connecting ideas fluidly. Use cohesive devices like conjunctions and pronouns to link sentences.
coherence cohesion
Focus on one central idea in each paragraph and expand on it, providing more examples or details to strengthen the argument.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task adequately by providing a more detailed description of the current facilities and explain in depth how these can tie into the economic benefits of tourism.
task achievement
To improve the writing tone, consider using more varied sentence structures and incorporate a formal tone consistently throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite