The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
The line chart shows data about rubber duck exports in three different countries between 2013 and 2017.
In general, Only two countries in the graph
that
have to increase the sales volume Correct pronoun usage
apply
at the end
of the period. However
, only one country has failed to increase the
export volume from 2013 to 2017.
Change the word
its
Firstly
, the UK have a steady growth at
the Change preposition
from
begining
of 2013 until 2017. Correct your spelling
beginning
On the other hand
, the
EU Correct article usage
apply
transaction
Fix the agreement mistake
transactions
have
dropped in 2015 before Unnecessary verb
apply
it have overtake
the UK in 2017 and the EU Wrong verb form
overtook
have
Wrong verb form
had
dominance
Replace the word
dominant
the
Correct article usage
apply
sale
in 2017 at the top of Fix the agreement mistake
sales
UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
Lastly
, The USA have extend
Wrong verb form
extended
it
sales in 2014 but between 2014 and 2016, rubber Change the pronoun
its
ducks
exports Change the noun form
duck
remain
steady until 2017 Wrong verb form
remained
it have
significantly Verb problem
when they
drop
.
In conclusion, not all Change the verb form
dropped
nation
in the graph have Fix the agreement mistake
nations
expand
Change the verb form
expanded
they
sales except Correct pronoun usage
their
USA
. The EU have Correct article usage
the USA
lead
the trade of rubber Wrong verb form
led
duck
based on the diagram.Fix the agreement mistake
ducks
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