A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply
Dear John,
I am writing to express my opinion about the reliable lessons. And
course
which is
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apply
attend
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attended
this days
. Change the determiner
this day
these days
Although
,
I am good at all subjects of university's classes, my powerful interests Remove the comma
apply
lead
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led
to
attend Correct pronoun usage
me to
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a mathematic
the mathematic
mathematic
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mathematics
course
of
excellent Change preposition
with
professor
's lesson
.
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lessons
of
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apply
the
things are connected with maths and everything Correct article usage
apply
demand
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demands
this
important subject of the world. Because,
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apply
this
one has main
role of every work. So, I want to improve my maths skills for doing every Change the article
the main
exercises
well. Change to a singular noun
exercise
This
course
's price is little
bit expensive, because ofAdd an article
a little
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the
professor
gives you free and special books for Correct article usage
the professor
learn
every part of Change the verb form
learning
topics
.
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the topics
Furthermore
, this
course
is placed in huge
and comfortable room of Add an article
a huge
university
. The most Add an article
the university
satisfied
part is you don't need to waste your time on Replace the word
satisfying
a way
. Correct your spelling
away
Additionally
, you can brush up every day in a
extra room with Change the article
an
group
of intelligent pupils often lectures or university lessons. And Add an article
a group
professor
always separates time for every student who is find
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finding
a
difficulties Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
while
learning new informations
.
If you want to join Change the wording
information
pieces of information
this
course
, you should contact with professor
's administrator. Because he is
not Verb problem
does
any
time for Add a missing verb
have any
works
like Fix the agreement mistake
work
this
. And you don't need worried about quality of course
. Because teacher
always tough topics by using modern techniques.
I believe that all Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
informations
- set perfectly matches your requirement and I look forward Change the wording
information
pieces of information
your
response.
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to your
Your
sincerely ,
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Yours
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by clearly organizing ideas into distinct paragraphs with one main idea each, and use transitional words or phrases to improve the flow of your text.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear greeting and closing to maintain the format of a letter, which you have done well. Consider adding a date and more personalized closing remarks for a natural touch.
task achievement
Clarify and expand on details of the course including specific aspects you found beneficial, how it impacted you, and why this might also benefit your friend. This helps in fully responding to the task's requirements.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent, suitable writing tone throughout your letter. A more formal tone is typically expected in this kind of correspondence, avoiding contractions ('I am' instead of 'I'm') and ensuring proper punctuation and capitalization.
