the charts below show tha average percentages in meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The three pie charts display the average proportions of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
in breakfast, lunch, dinner
and snacks
meals consumed in the Americans meals .
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snack
Overall
, people tend to consume more sodium
and saturated fat in dinner
meal
. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
While
they eat snacks countian
high amounts of added Correct your spelling
contain
sugar
.
Regarding Americans
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American's
Americans'
nutrients
consumption Change the noun form
nutrient
in
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at
dinner
, they eat larger
quantity of Add an article
a larger
sodium
account
for 43% and saturated fat Wrong verb form
accounting
at
37% Change preposition
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therefore
it considered
too Add a missing verb
is considered
much
unhealthy. During Fix the agreement mistake
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lunch
they intake the same nutrients at 29% and 26% respectively Add a comma
lunch,
comparing
with Wrong verb form
compared
the
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dinner
it
approximately 15 percentage points less. Correct pronoun usage
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In addition
, they also
prefer snacks with high
percentage of added Add an article
a high
sugar
at 42% and low sodium
by only 14%.
However
, the provided data shows that in the breakfast smaller amounts of the three items are consumed, 14% of
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sodium
, 16% of
saturated fat and 16% Change preposition
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of
added Change preposition
apply
sugar
which makes it the healthiest meal.Submitted by zx00154 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner with synonyms.
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