The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrient, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrient, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts display the percentage of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in normal meals eaten by people living in America that may not be healthy if consumed too much.
Overall
, the charts show different types of nutrients in breakfast, lunch,
dinner
, and
snacks
. Foods that contain sodium and saturated fat are mostly eaten during
dinner
time,
while
sugary foods are eaten for
snacks
. Around 43% and 37% of
American
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have
dinner
meals which
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mineral and fat, respectively. Sodium and fat are less likely to be eaten for
snacks
and breakfast.
However
, those two are contained in almost similar
percentage
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which are around 26%-29% that
American
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Americans
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eat for lunch. People in America consume around 42% of sugary
snacks
while
they eat minimal of them for breakfast and lunch
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is around 16% and 19%,
consecutively
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respectively
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. Second to
snacks
, foods that are prepared for
dinner
, have around 23% of sugar in them.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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