The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
These pie charts illustrate how much a person consumes three types of nutrients
sodium
, saturated fat, and added
sugar
in every meal on a normal day. The data is in percentage.
Overall
, it is noticeable that each person tends to have more of their daily
sodium
and saturated fat by having
dinner
,
however
, the highest percentage of
sugar
consumption is by having
snacks
. Starting off with
sodium
, most individuals have
this
nutrient with their
dinner
which contains 43% of all the meals. Breakfast and
snacks
,
however
, each contain only 14% of the whole amount of
sodium
consumption. Moving on to saturated fat, these kinds of nutrients,
moreover
, can be found mostly in
dinner
with 37% of all,
as well as
, lunch to be in the second level with more than one-fifth.
On the other hand
, added
sugar
is mostly consumed by having
snacks
on a daily basis. As is shown in the
last
pie chart, 42% of our daily
sugar
is found in
this
meal,
although
, breakfast has the least amount of
sugar
with 16% for starting off the day. In conclusion, people are more likely to consume
sodium
and fat in their
dinner
,
however
,
snacks
have the highest percentage of added
sugar
.
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