The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
the given pie charts
descibe
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describe
the amount of journal
articles
read per
week
by all
students
,
PhD
students
and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
Overall
, the
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PhD
students
are
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read more
articles
compared to junior lecturers.
However
, junior lectures and
phd
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Ph.D.
students
do not affect the
result
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results
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of all
students
in
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on
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a major scale. In detail,
Overwhelming
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the Overwhelming
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majority of
PhD
students
read more than 12
articles
per
week
while
in
related
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relation
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to Junior lectures hefty majority of 75% read 6 to 11
articles
per
week
.
However
, in comparison to all
students
, just above
two thirds
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two-thirds
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read only 1-5
articles
per
week
.
Furthermore
,more than 95% of
Phd
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PhD
students
are
reffered
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referred
over
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to over
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6
articles
per
week
while
that number
is
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99%
in
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for
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junior lecturers.
Where as
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Whereas
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in
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apply
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all
students
only just below
one fourth
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one-fourth
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read more than 6
articles
per
week
.
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